I swapped my big sister for an extremely fat bunny

WALT Write an introduction that hooks your audience.

Hook-Dialogue 

To entertain: I swapped my big sister for an extremely fat bunny.

Introduction:

“Hi Maggie,” Zoey said excitedly as she came in. “Hi…” Maggie mumbled. Knock
knock, “hi Zara!” 

“Who's this you brought along?”

“It's my pet Bon Bon(big fat bunny). Can I trade something for it?” “Hmmm what
do you have to offer?”

“I have a jar filled with gel pens, this enormous box filled with lego pieces, a giant
stuffed bear and lots of mini stuffed toys.”

“No no no” exclaimed Zara. “Zoey, I don't want any of your stuffed toys or lego
pieces”. You need to find something else to swap for but what else is there? Hmm
wait I have an idea! I'll swap you my big sister for Bon Bon, ok fine. OMG it's so
fluffy and cute! Oh wait Zoey I have to go home now, sorry i'll see you at school
tomorrow bye bye. (Car parks on the driveway) Door opens “Hi Zoey” mum said
excitedly. Wait where's your big sister and why are you holding a bunny. My mum
frowned at me, I blushed. Then I told my mum “I traded Maggie away” Zoey shyly
said.

My mum was fierce and she demanded I had to bring her back before night falls
so I started sprinting to Zara’s house. I finally arrived at Zara’s house and I
knocked on the door, knock knock. Oh hi Zoey! Why are you here? I'm here to
swap back Bon Bon for my sister, oh sorry I traded your sister to my friend Debbie
for this amazing ukulele. I was full of shock and I panicked I wouldn't be able to
get my sister back in time! Then I quickly swapped back the big fat bunny for the
ukulele.

To be continued... 

Speech - Why we should save animals from extinction

Speech Topic: Why we should save animals from extinction                    

Main point

Personal pronoun           

Questions

Introduction:

Why we should save animals from extinction, Imagine if there were no animals alive on earth
and you must be thinking about what will happen. So I'm here to  convince you why we should
save animals from extinction. We should save animals from extinction because they're living
things just like us. We shouldn't harm them because if they went extinct, who knows what will
happen. 

Main point 1:Why we should save the animals

 First, if animals go extinct we and the world would be changed mainly by climate change and
extinction. I mean like what would be the point about having zoos if all the animals were extinct?
Giant pandas first became endangered in 1990 due to excessive poaching in the 80s and
deforestation, depleting their bamboo food source. Bamboo can grow extensively in
mountainous or barren lands but then die in the winter because it's too cold for the bamboo to
continue growing and survive. This forces giant pandas in those areas to relocate for their food.
I think this is super good/bad/unfair/…Disgraceful(bad)/Amazing(good)/discriminatory
(unfair) and

imagine if this was you,now do you know how it feels? The wildlife caregivers are important
because they are doing all they can to save these different species of animals, this is crucial to
the wildlife and us.

Main point 2:What will happen

For my second point, I will inform you of what would happen if our animals went extinct.
Wild forests and grasslands would die because they are adapted to rely on animal decomposers.
This would cause a loss of rainfall, atmospheric change and climate change. This is important
because grasslands and wild forest are where we get supplies from and where native things live.
Climate change is super important because Climate change can be thought of as the average or
typical weather conditions we experience. Scientists know that climate varies naturally on
many timescales and they know that people are affecting climate - particularly through e
missions of greenhouse gases. If a species has a unique function in its ecosystem, its loss can
prompt cascading effects through the food chain. You may wonder about the environment we
are in. It would be critical because our air and plants would be polluted and we would be
breathing in a huge amount of contaminated air!

Main point 3:Why it is important

It is important to save animals as healthy ecosystems depend on plant and animal species as
their foundations. Without healthy forests, grasslands, rivers, oceans and other ecosystems we
will not have clean air, water, or land. If we allow our environment to become infected we're
risking our own health. It is really important to keep these animals alive because when we
conserve and protect the natural habitat of wildlife species, we enrich our planet. To do so,
we must keep the animals in their natural place. Natural habitats will also be beneficial for
humans since it helps keep the essential watersheds intact and ensures clean, freshwater and
that's why it's important to save animals from extinction. 

Conclusion: Now you know why you should save animals from extinction. I personally think that
animals shouldn’t be extinct. As I said, there are just living things like us and they should be
protected. Why would you want animals to go extinct anyways?

Thank you.

Slime Experiment - Maps

Scratch - Health map

The Waking Giant

Precise noun

Descriptive adjectives and verbs

Detail

The waking giant

As the gigantic palace rumbled a rock stone giant was coming out of the smooth, even floor. The oak trees were swaying side to side elegantly like they were dancing, while the birds went chirp! chirp! Then the waking giant was full of rage and just then I heard him bellow...ROARRR! The elegant palace was shaking like in a giant earthquake!

“Help!” Screamed the horrified public.

The earth was moving like crazy, windows were shattering and buildings were falling apart! After the magnificent giant was pulling itself up, his head came up then the whole body. All of a sudden a gigantic rumble shook the whole city to crumbs. 

Meanwhile, CRASH! Went the road, the whole entire city would be destroyed if this madness didn't stop!

 ROARRRRR!! The barely destroyed city shook continually and the river was SPLASHING around like a Miniature tsunami. Seawater was gushing everywhere and the city was going to drown!

“AHHH! HELP ME!” the public cried loudly

CLING CLASH! There went the unstabilized palace.

Bread Experiment

The time I fell off my bike

The time I fell off my bike

I was 7 years old, living in New Zealand.  My dad and I could see the
sunny heart, warming (sun rising). I was riding my navy blue and light pink
bike around the driveway. My dad shouted, “Come inside now!” I replied
“okay!”. I felt the trees swishing side to side. 

Sometime later I was riding my bike back into the small overflowed garage.
My right foot accidentally slipped and I felt a shock  coming from my leg…
SIZZLE. When I tried to stand up my legs were burning, I went back inside
as fast as I could. I was able to get inside, I told my dad that I fell off my
bike and I got a few scratches along with some bruises.

 The scratches had a little bit of dark maroon blood coming out very slowly.
My dad asked me how it happened and I told him when I was putting my
bike away my left leg slipped and I crashed! Whenever I get an injury my
dad is always really worried, sometime later my amazing dad went to get
the cooling mint cream. 

I could smell toasted  golden sandwiches in the small,crowded,cramped
kitchen, when my dad came back I applied the mint cream on my scratches.
The burn was blazing up my leg,  it didn't feel like anything but I could feel
my blazing leg cooling down. After a few days my leg was fully fixed and
healed. The next day I felt like riding my bike again so I hopped on and
started riding like how I always used to do. Hopefully I don't come
crashing down again.

Conclusion

I never ever want to fall off my bike again!