CREEK...Not again the door of the library opened. I looked at the
sunshine reflecting onto me,the students raced in and one chose me
but she dropped me instead “Ouch!” that was painful.
sunshine reflecting onto me,the students raced in and one chose me
but she dropped me instead “Ouch!” that was painful.
I can smell sweaty fingers all over me “ew!” that was gross” I can smell
dust I whispered to the other books. All the other books smell like fresh
fruits but i smell like old stinky paper this is so unfair. I wish i was fresh
like my other friends’.
dust I whispered to the other books. All the other books smell like fresh
fruits but i smell like old stinky paper this is so unfair. I wish i was fresh
like my other friends’.
I can see children reading colourful books to each other and students
whispering to each others ears. Then i also see a line of students
returning there books back to the library. I also see children finishing
of there work and some are drawing
whispering to each others ears. Then i also see a line of students
returning there books back to the library. I also see children finishing
of there work and some are drawing
While all other books are with the students,in my head I was thinking
of how do I make myself clean and smell like flowers. Well I could take
a bath but all my pages will fall of so i would just have to stay like this
forever.
of how do I make myself clean and smell like flowers. Well I could take
a bath but all my pages will fall of so i would just have to stay like this
forever.
I liked how you used CREEK for the start of your sentence but I think
you should work on put in some interesting vocabulary.Angelina
you should work on put in some interesting vocabulary.Angelina
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