The coral reef

The coral reef

The vibrant clown fish are swishing through the bright coral. The sea anemone is long like raw spaghetti in the ocean. The clown fishes eyes are dark like dark chocolate. The coral is like wobbly jelly jiggling in the glistening turquoise water. The second colour of the rainbow is orange, the same colour of the sea anemone and clown fishes. The clown fishes have white stripes like a zebra. They are small and cute looking.

The clown fishes are hunting for food sneakily, trying to find a tasty snack before a predator eats them. Clown fishes eat other fishes leftovers on the sea anemone. They eat to satisfy their tiny appetites.

The sea waves splash on the shore. The water is so clear you can see the fishes swimming and the sun is making a waterfall of light into the ocean. The sea is as beautiful as a sunset.

 

My colour poem

My Speech Judging sheet

Speech Judging Sheet

Name: Zoey              Topic: Summer is the best season                   

Category	Main Points	Self Assessment
		Low                                         High
		1           2 3           4 5
Structure	My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.	4
Delivery	I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience. My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.	4
Content	My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.	3
Language	I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)	2
Time	My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.	4

Next time I need to

Use a louder voice and hand gestures.

Teacher Comment

Well done Zoey, you were very organised and prepared.  You gave lots of examples to explain your main ideas and included a great quote and call to action in your conclusion.  Your next step is to speak a little bit louder.