Wednesday, May 29, 2019

Leave

Perspective Writing me as a Book

CREEK...Not again the door of the library opened. I looked at the
sunshine reflecting onto me,the students raced in and one chose me
but she dropped me instead  “Ouch!” that was painful.
I can smell sweaty fingers all over me “ew!” that was gross” I can smell
dust I whispered to the other books. All the other books smell like fresh
fruits but i smell like old stinky paper this is so unfair. I wish i was fresh
like my other friends’.
I can see children reading colourful books to each other and students
whispering to each others ears. Then i also see a line of students
returning there books back to the library. I also see children finishing
of there work and some are drawing
While all other books are with the students,in my head I was thinking
of how do I make myself clean and smell like flowers. Well I could take
a bath but all my pages will fall of so i would just have to stay like this
forever.

I liked how you used CREEK for the start of your sentence but I think
you should work on put in some interesting vocabulary.Angelina

Wednesday, May 22, 2019

Tuatua

Why school uniforms are necessary?

Why school uniforms are necessary?
This is my opinion that school uniforms should be compulsory in all schools.
You will know why school uniforms are necessary at the end.
First of all don't worry if your not wearing the uniform cause you don't need
to wear it everyday because it can get murky and greasy if you wear it all
day. If you wear it all day you will have to wash it a lot.
You don't need to wear the uniform all day because if you wear different kind
of shirts or skirts and pants nothing will happen. If you wear something else
it's like the same thing because your still wearing something.
Some schools like Halsey drive has a symbol on the left shoulder. On the
symbol it has two different kind of trees,a boat and a book with a quill. The
symbol also shows respect to the entire school.
Would you say school uniforms are necessary?

I Angelina have read your writing and I liked how you put in the school
symbols and how they mean.

Wednesday, May 15, 2019

Jump jam

Today we're gonna be doing jump jam but not just any normal jump jam Brett was here at the school. So I wanted to have a great time dancing around.

I was excited to do jump jam cause I wanted to have some amazing time outside with the whistling wind swirling around me. When I was in the line I saw Brett and I was so ready to start. The first dance was really funny to me but might not be funny to other different people.The moves were great but I liked it when Brett made it a bit different after we finished the 2nd song started.When the 2nd song started Brett invited the teacher on the stage and did the coconut song dance and so far that was my favourite song for now cause we haven’t done the 3rd song. After the coconut song the teachers came back down  and Brett also said “everybody sit down” so I sat down when I music started and we did the dancing while sitting. I liked the music when it said YMCA after when the song finishes Brett says some notices about jump jam and that was everything we did then we went back to class.
I like how you used whistling wind swirling around me. Angelina

Wednesday, May 8, 2019

Room 7's Assembly

Room 7’s Assembly
This week (on Friday) it will be room 7’s assembly. Right now I'm
feeling a bit nervous because i'm a bit shy saying something in
front of the whole school. We all have a line or more to say. It
was sign language week so we had the National Anthem but
there's a twist it's in sign language, we also did the sign language
actions.


Then we started the different parts of a castle and i was first so I
said “A brief guide about British castles” Zoey loudly speaked.

  1. After i finished saying my line I passed the microphone to my

buddy friend Samantha.


Once Mrs Davies crook and Ms Knowles had gave out the
principal’s award (I'm wondering who would get the award) To
be continued...

I like how you use lots of punctuation.
Next time you should have some vocabulary. BWB: Samantha