My Holiday

My Holiday

On the amazing holidays I watched an awesome
movie (I mean captain America 1). In the first week
I told my family to join me in watching captain
America 1 and they didn’t take long because
they're always enjoy movies mostly Avengers.

I heard the front door open so I went to check,and
it was my dad but not just my father he bought
PIZZA! I went and gave my family cheese and
pepperoni pizza. Once i  bit into the pizza it was
melting in my mouth.

I like how you used paragraphs, next time you
should use punctuation like commas.

BWB:Samantha

Anzac day

Anzac day

Anzac day is a very special day because
that is when world war 1 started. The first
world war had an enormous impact on New
Zealand. British and colonial forces later
fought to open up the north island for
settlement. War shaped 19th-century New
Zealand.

Facts about Towers

1.The towers location was at Edinburgh,Scotland.

2.The construction started at June 1999.

3.It cost 414 million dollars.

4.Inaugurated at 9 October 2004.

My Weekend

My weekend

Finally… the weekends. You won't believe what i did, here's the
story. At 8 o’clock I snuck out of bed and made some cheese bread.
I added just cheese on a bread and put it in the toaster. I,ve waited
for a couple of minutes,until the toaster went ding!  I used my fingers
to pick the bread up then suddenly a burn shocked me on my finger
and i said “ow!” shouted Zoey. But luckily not a single person heard
me. After 5 minutes once i've finished eating the cheese bread. My
parents came down stairs and they said “ how did u wake up so
early?” said Zoey's parents. I said “ I don't know” I replied. My Mum
and Dad was getting ready for the day, while my parents were
getting ready i made some butter toasted bread for them. The toast
d bread was brown golden with a bit of a crunch. When my parents
came down i surprised them with the buttery toast and they loved
it! To be continued...     

Hi Zoey i like it how used vocab and detail.From Shreya

British Castle parts

What is a Castle?

A Castle is a really strong building where the king, queen, prince and
princess stays. The Castle was made to protect people,so the enemies
couldn't get the innocent lives. Castles were made thousands of years ago.

What is a moat?

The moat is made to not let enemies in and around the Castle was
surrounded with deep and stinky water. That's enemies couldn’t get in, they
didn't want to swim because the water was dirty. They also didn't want to
swim because they couldn’t fight (attack)What is a arrow slit?

Arrow slits were made so narrow because the enemies couldn’t shoot the
arrows through. While who's inside can use the bow and launch,the

enemies keep on trying until they give up. You can use arrow slits to defend
yourself from getting hurt.

What is a drawbridge?

A drawbridge is made to protect the Castle because whenever intruders
come the drawbridge goes up so they can't get in. The drawbridge is
normally made out of wood,metal and chains. When enemies come a
person pulls the chains and then the drawbridge goes up.