Wednesday, September 9, 2020

Descriptive Writing

 




      Descriptive Writing



As the mud splotches messily I cheer on the sideline. Elegantly the trees sway side to side like dancing giraffes. While I cheered them on they started to huff and puff, I was freezing like a frozen popsicle. Slowly the sky started to go gloomy and dark, I zipped up my jacket As speedy as a jet they were thriving through the course. 


Furiously they launch up jumping over the weather damaged hurdle. When they jump down mud splashes. The vast field was a giant mud pit made perfectly for a bunch of pigs. I crossed my arms as the weather turned into a tsunami. It also felt like the wind was controlling me.


While the runners run,they only have 1 lap to go so I continue to cheer them on. Watching along I get splattered with mud on the leg, they turn on their fierce faces. There they ZOOM past the finish line! Everyone clapped their hands, then they've all won a victory no matter what place they have come.                                                                                                                        


Thursday, September 3, 2020

Alliteration poem

Alliteration poem

Fifty fancy, furious, flapping, female flamingos and their Father were finally famous. Felica is

as fast as Flash especially on Fridays. Fernanda is fabulous at math when it comes to fractions.

Five of the frivolous flamingos flapped around Fantasy canyon. Whilst Forty other flamingos.

Floppy Fernando flys fiercely firing fuchsia flame balls through the flashing forest.