Tuesday, May 22, 2018

Year 4's camp

Year 4’s Camp


Dear Mrs Ritchie


I am writing to express my opinion about why year 4’s should also go to camp.


You may believe that year 4 students are too immature to go to camp. However  I
disagree because activities such as kayaking and Mountain biking teach us important
skills we need now. Kayaking helps teach life saving in the vast ocean. Mountain biking
is also very important because it will teach those that can’t how to ride a bike.


Another good activity is Raft building, which teaches about teamwork and leadership.
You will also learn how to tie knots and build things. Archery is also something that can
teach you how to use your skills to hit a target. Archery is like a bow but you have to
aim and hit the target. It's like throwing a ball to hit the target but easier. Archery is all
about your aim because its like hunting for animals but hitting the target.


The reasons above are why year 4’s should go to camp like year 6 because you can
learn new skills and you can't be with your mum and dad forever because you have to
do things yourself when you grow up for yourself and camp would be a good way to star
t to be self reliant.


I look forward to hearing from you


Your sincerely


Zoey



2 comments:

  1. Amazing work Zoey I would 100 percent let year 4's go to camp if I were her.

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  2. I like the way you used the word immature instead small well done zoey

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